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Reply #15 - Nov 14th, 2011 at 8:08am
 
Enhanced my Resume: with tips from Samuel J.
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Reply #16 - Nov 14th, 2011 at 2:14pm
 
You need to check your grammar, spelling and punctuation.
If, I was a prospective employer, you wouldn't make the first round with that resume.

I'm not trying to be a dick either  Smiley I tell it like it is, so don't take this the wrong way and get all butt hurt. You need a lot of help. It's pretty terrible. Someone looking to hire you, isn't interested in your road testing capability. They want to see your skill information and schooling info too. Don't make it long and drawn out with frivolous information, like coordinating RO's ETC.

If, I get some time this week, I'll be glad to work on it to try and help you  Smiley

I can tell you up front. You need to add the reference information. This is key to making a good impression.
Without it, and having upon request, it makes you look lazy  Smiley
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Reply #17 - Nov 15th, 2011 at 6:20pm
 
I like it Adam, but it might need a tadbit more detail.

Looks like we have been trained by the same Greats, my updated resume includes being part of the Picogroup...

Heres an automotive template on Microsoft Wink

http://office.microsoft.com/en-us/templates/results.aspx?qu=AUTOMOTIVE+resumes&e...;
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Reply #18 - Nov 15th, 2011 at 7:30pm
 
PEDRO SANCHEZ wrote on Nov 15th, 2011 at 6:20pm:
my updated resume includes being part of the Picogroup...


LOL!  i did that too  Wink.  for the most part no one knew what it was, but it sure was a good conversation starter  Grin.
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Reply #19 - Nov 16th, 2011 at 7:05am
 
PEDRO SANCHEZ wrote on Nov 15th, 2011 at 6:20pm:
I like it Adam, but it might need a tadbit more detail.

Looks like we have been trained by the same Greats, my updated resume includes being part of the Picogroup...

Heres an automotive template on Microsoft Wink

http://office.microsoft.com/en-us/templates/results.aspx?qu=AUTOMOTIVE+resumes&e...;


Thanks.

Here is a rough draft, of the first page.

Did you have employment history on a second page?
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Reply #20 - Nov 16th, 2011 at 10:11am
 
Here's a quick edit.  Don't substitute and, for & in a resume  Smiley Substitutions make you look lazy.

Try to remember, it's in the details. Glaring omission of details will kill you.  The word, Driveability is not hyphenated  Smiley  

I'm not claiming to be MR RESUME, but I know people that hire and we always talk about the details missed. Just like the job.

Adam Sowa 335 E. Palatine Rd, Palatine, IL 60094

847-220-0149

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Professional Profile



• Professional automotive technician with twenty five years of progressive experience.

• Increased responsibility with continued training in diagnostics, electrical systems and engine performance.

• Self-motivated and quality oriented with pride of workmanship.

• Enjoys helping others solve problems, as well as, knowing when to ask for advice.



Skills Summary
· Certified with 22 years as an ASE - A8 Master. 15 years of L1 Advanced Engine Performance.

· Consistently maintains knowledge of new industry roll-outs and diagnostic techniques through continued training.

· Extensive experience of driveability, electronic systems and diagnostics. Including OBD emissions failures.

· Thorough knowledge of oscilloscope and emissions analyzer operation and data analysis.

    Although primary duties are aligned with diagnostics, other proficiencies include mechanical assessments and repairs.

· Proficient with factory scan tools: Ford IDS, GM Tech2, Chrysler Wi-tech and DRBIII,

Honda HIM and GNA, Toyota Tech Stream, Snap-on, Autoenginuity and Launch.

· Has thorough experience with Hunter and John Bean alignment systems.

· Professional Memberships: ASE, International Automotive Technicians Network (iATN) and

Autonerdz community forms.

· Reliable, dependable, and a self-motivated employee.

Education



1985 Lincoln Technical Institute, Norridge, IL.

· Automotive/Diesel Service

Continued factory and aftermarket training:

Autotrain

Automotive Training Group (ATG)

AC Delco

CarQuest
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Reply #21 - Nov 16th, 2011 at 10:20am
 
drdiesel1 wrote on Nov 16th, 2011 at 10:11am:
Here's a quick edit.  Don't substitute and, for & in a resume  Smiley Substitutions make you look lazy.



True.
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Reply #22 - Nov 16th, 2011 at 10:25am
 
Hopefully, Smiley some of this will help you.

Good luck with the pavement pounding.
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Reply #23 - Nov 16th, 2011 at 6:54pm
 
crackerclicker wrote on Nov 15th, 2011 at 7:30pm:
but it sure was a good conversation starter. 


I agree, the Picoboot has sparked alot of convos for me......

Adam Sowa wrote on Nov 16th, 2011 at 7:05am:
Did you have employment history on a second page?


I believe the history was on the second page. Your rough draft looks alot cleaner. Smiley
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Reply #24 - Nov 16th, 2011 at 7:24pm
 
PEDRO SANCHEZ wrote on Nov 16th, 2011 at 6:54pm:
crackerclicker wrote on Nov 15th, 2011 at 7:30pm:
but it sure was a good conversation starter.  


I agree, the Picoboot has sparked alot of convos for me......

Adam Sowa wrote on Nov 16th, 2011 at 7:05am:
Did you have employment history on a second page?


I believe the history was on the second page. Your rough draft looks alot cleaner. Smiley


Thanks.

How detailed were you with employment history?
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Reply #25 - Nov 16th, 2011 at 8:35pm
 
Name of business
address
phone#
timespan employed
supervisor's name
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Reply #26 - Nov 17th, 2011 at 10:37am
 
drdiesel1 wrote on Nov 16th, 2011 at 10:11am:
Here's a quick edit.  Don't substitute and, for & in a resume  Smiley Substitutions make you look lazy.

Try to remember, it's in the details. Glaring omission of details will kill you.  The word, Driveability is not hyphenated  Smiley  

I'm not claiming to be MR RESUME, but I know people that hire and we always talk about the details missed. Just like the job.


Is this better?


Tom pointed out a grammar error as well.

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Reply #27 - Nov 17th, 2011 at 11:42pm
 
Yep  Smiley Better.
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Reply #28 - Nov 24th, 2011 at 8:36am
 
Resume with employment history. I left out personal refs, being that this is a public forum.
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Reply #29 - Nov 24th, 2011 at 12:28pm
 
Adam Sowa wrote on Nov 24th, 2011 at 8:36am:
Resume with employment history. I left out personal refs, being that this is a public forum.


Reason for leaving last three places of employment?
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